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[Meditation Plane]

Seems you've created primitives with textures. Instead of a platform, build a walled garden to prevent players falling off and put a building (like a museum in the center) and show off your objects and scripts.

There are a couple of examples of art collabs that have used a museum type deal to show off participant's work. Outside of NewGrounds on SecondLife there is something called "Tower of Primitives" that showcased LindenLab's work. Consider taking a look.

Wreaker404 responds:

Ok, I think a walled garden with sort of an ancient Greek/Roman building in the center would be a cool aesthetic. Also, jumping off of the edge doesn't matter because you'll just respawn on the center platform 🙂.

[Fall Dash: Classic]

This is pretty neat. Consider integrating with the API so NewGrounders can keep track of their scores.

GKProduction responds:

Thanks for the advice! I will probably do this in my future larger games, but I don't plan to add API to my old and classic games yet.

[Stardust Journey - Artfight 2024 Mass Atack!]

I love the graphics of this. I don't usually play graphic novels but this was tastefully done. :)

Diadantist responds:

Thank you so much! 💙

[Color Waves (Game Jam Prototype)]

I really like this concept. What it needs: Main characters with styled boats and voice actors, a story line, some more event like things sprinkled throughout the map... and more color. Good work!

burastar responds:

Thanks for your review! Fair points!

[Neon drop]

Pretty mesmerizing. Good work! :)

bit0-9002 responds:

Thank you!

[2D-TD 2]

Very simple, very silly. Keep up the good work! :)

SIM0FFICIAL responds:

Thanks!

[Chicken Joust!]

Dang, very addictive and art on point! Great work! :D

Stopsignal responds:

Thanks Yendor!!! Glad you like it :D

[Box Factory]

This is a fun little game. Simple enough with a lot going on to try to disrupt you. Good work!

Poceyka responds:

thanks!

[Nefarius - The Last Wizard (Updated)]

Not a bad rougelite/like. Art is on point. Enemies feel a bit too same-ish with only a king slime. Obstacles though seem non-existant (unless there is another level I am missing with it, I could go right through trees. With the right amount of polish this can certainly shine. Good work! :)

Snow-Hex responds:

Thank you for your comment, soon those things you mention will be "fixed" haha🦖